Comment added on Wednesday, 09 September 2020
Thank you Margaret, I see your point regarding the intensity of the light over the sculpture. I will see what dynamic range of have in the clouds to see if that can assist to remove the bright patch
Comment added on Sunday, 06 September 2020
What an amazing range of subjects you find interesting and offer here to the critique room for us all to enjoy. You are quite right about the sky. If you had had a sky with cumulus clouds those curvaceous clouds would have rivalled the sculpture. The white patch in the sky near the sculpture centre right draws your eye and maybe a little too bright. A nit picking point: put your signature on the right so as not to bump into the sculpture's shadows. Some wonderful shapes here and I like the drama of the sombre tonal range.